How can I write zettel notes in my own words?
Hello fellow Zettelkasteners. I have heard that zettel notes should be written in one's own words. But I have never understood what it means to write notes in your own words. Most of the time I just copy a passage with minor changes or I translate an English passage as if I copied it.
So let's say that I read "Research methods and statistics" by Sherri Jackson and see a passage which states that "When empirically solvable problems are studied, they are always open
to the principle of falsifiability—the idea that a scientific theory must be stated in such a way that it is possible to refute or disconfirm it. In other words, the theory must predict not only what will happen but also what will not happen. A theory is not scientific if it is irrefutable". How can I write it as a note in my own words? Should I write it in my own words to begin with?
I thought about different strategies. I could first read a paragraph, then close the book, then rewrite some ideas from memory without looking at the text. Or I could simply read the text and not bother with the information within and just write my thoughts that could come into my mind. Or I could write the note as if I explained it to my mom.
But the problem is that I could easily forget some piece of information while writing from memory, or I wouldn't get a lot of thoughts while reading, or I would explain what I had read without really understanding the text.
Note that I write my zettel notes in Romanian so when I read a text in English I translate it in Romanian. Not that it helps.
Am I missing something? Can you tell me how can I write a zettel note without copying from the text or write it in my own words?
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This is a really good question and one with which I think most of us struggle at one point or another. I find that if I try to read a paragraph and then somehow summarize or restate it in my own words, the result is very unsatisfying.
My approach has evolved over time and is still evolving. But I try to read a full article or a few chapters in a book, taking very short bullet point notes as I go along (those can be hand-written or typed). Then I let things sit for a day or two. When I come back to it, I read through my notes and select a few that I want to incorporate into a zettel, and write that zettel without reference to the original material. I'm forcing myself to remember what I read, to think about it, and then to write my own version of the idea. In doing so, I may even introduce some of my own thoughts into the zettel
I'm not sure if this will work for you, but I believe you need some way to distance yourself from the original text, so that you don't use it as a crutch when attempting to write down the thought that originally caught your attention.
This approach for written material (described above) evolved from a practice, over many years at university, of taking lecture notes. There, I had no access to an original of the professor's lecture, so I had to listen carefully, capture what I thought was important, and then afterwards review my own notes and highlight what I thought was critical to my learning. I used a sort of Cornell notes approach/format, although I didn't know about that actual technique at the time. I didn't realize at the time that what I was forced to do was actually aiding my comprehension and my ability to think about and write ideas in my "own way".
I do this, as well.
I also try to imagine that I'm trying to tell/teach a friend what I learned from a reference. I won't be able to remember the specific quotes or phrasing, so I have to put it into my own terms.
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Great question!
First, the phrase we use "writing in my own words" is an unfortunate one, because it suggests to people that we are simply trying to rewrite a passage from a book using different words. I saw this all the time as a writing tutor, students basically rewriting the quote, but changing a few words here and there. This is not what we're looking to do.
To "rewrite in your own words" is to take the quote and first examine it in the context of your own thoughts on the subject. Do you agree with it completely? Yes? Great! You can just quote the person in your writing. There's no rule saying that you have to change what a person wrote. If they said it best, and you have literally nothing to add, quote them directly.
Truth is, you probably do have something to add. And, this is where the work happens. Try thinking of it as expanding on the ideas presented in the quote. Try challenging the quote. Try explaining the quote to a friend (mentioned above). Then try putting those practices into words. When you do, you'll more than likely have something that's both you and the quote.
(Also, side note, ALWAYS cite your sources. Writing a quote in your own words does not make the idea your own. It is someone else's in your own words. Citations are for ideas, not just a string of words put together. I mention it, cuz I see a lot of people in the ZK world "disregarding" the original quote after they rewrite is, as if the ideas are their own. They ain't.)
You picked a good quote to think about; copied again so nobody has to scroll up:
As a programmer, I might think of application of this idea to programming, and take note of the association:
Now if your quoted passage was the first and only source on falsification I had, I might add: "
This sounds like it's related to the principle of falsificability[[insert link]] in empirical sciences.
" where a reference to your quoted passage is included, with a definition of "falsificability"; over the years I might then discover Karl Popper and find out that it's called "falsifiability", not "falsificability", and then have to update all my references and also leave a breadcrumb for the old but wrong wordHope that's kind of a surprise answer that also helps with understanding the scope of processing notes (for a dumb programmer)
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@Helen_Shepherd
A P.S. to my last comment - I find the longer I let an idea (or rather, group of ideas) stew, the more they distill to what I really want to capture and save in my ZK. "Stewing" in this case involves not just time, but thinking about it (usually while walking) and talking to friends about it (including a wife who likes interesting and challenging discussions, some very bright children, and business associates and general friends). So when I finally sit down to write, the thought is truly atomic and clearly defined.
On first reading a book or listening to a lecture, I find there are tens or hundreds of ideas that capture my interest. If I let myself loose with a pdf and a highlighter, I might highlight 50% or more of an article. So any method that encourages me to be a bit more selective at first, and then pare down even more over time, is welcome.
Most of those initially exciting and interesting things appeal because they are shiny and new, but not necessarily because they are deep or profound or just simply worthy. Sorting that out takes some time.
@Helen_Shepherd
An example may be useful:
202110060851 How to write Zettels using your own words
body_of_a_zettel #--public
Zettels created from reading notes should be written using your own words, but the phrase isn't as straightforward as it may seem.
To create Zettels from reading notes using your own words doesn't mean to paraphrase what the authors said without adding anything to the ideas.[1] It means to add more to their statements based on your purpose for reading the source.[1]
There's no need to paraphrase.[1] You can just quote.[1] If they made a great description and you have nothing to add, quote away.[1] But chances are that you do have something to say.[1] After all, there was a reason you read the text.
This implies that when reading, you could transcribe the interesting pieces into reading notes. E.g.: Author says X, and you jot down X. But, I'd recommend to paraphrase instead. It improves recall of the ideas, which will be helpful later on.
You could employ the following method:
The intention of this method is three-fold. Firstly, to distance yourself from the source so you don't rely on it to explain the ideas.[2] Secondly, to write your own version of the ideas from memory after thinking about them.[2] And lastly, to ensure that you don't miss ideas crucial for your understanding of the big idea. Knowledge gaps can be deadly and [[202109301230]] and you don't want to miss the ideas you deemed important.
The method described by user @GeoEng51 [2] developed from several years of taking notes on lectures in college. Since they lacked access to a transcript of the lecture, they had to capture what felt important, then stand out the ideas that appeared essential for their understanding.[2]
Now to clarify the method.
Whether to read a text in its entirety or parts of it before processing is dependent on the text.[[202109101539]]
Stew means to let time pass, and think and talk about the ideas.[4] When it's time to write, you'll find that you know what you want to write Zettels about.[4]
Why are you picking only a few reading notes? Because the truth is that not all of the ideas presented in the source are relevant to you.[4] Some of them caught your attention because they were interesting and new, but it doesn't mean that they're important.[4] It's like going to a game shop. You'll be caught by all the good-looking games on the shelves, but only a few will really grab you.
Never skip the last step.[1] If you quote or paraphrase, you didn't come up with the idea.[1] If you don't cite, you're implying that you came up with the ideas.[1] And that can have serious consequences.
How you cite will depend on your citation style of choice. In my case, I use the IEEE style, so I add in-text citations [[202106100917]], then include a bibliography [[202106100849]] in the references of my Zettels.
Actually, the in-text citations are citekeys. If I ever produce text, I'll turn them into unique numbers and connect them to their corresponding references. E.g.:
[some citekey]: A reference
->[1] A reference
.Additionally, don't mistake the point of a citation. A citation connects to an idea, not to sentences.[[202107150757]]
References:
[1]: taurusnoises, “Re: how can I write zettel notes in my own words?,” Zettelkasten Forum, Oct. 04, 2021. https://forum.zettelkasten.de/discussion/comment/13146/#Comment_13146 (accessed Oct. 06, 2021).
[2]: GeoEng51, “Re: how can I write zettel notes in my own words?,” Zettelkasten Forum, Oct. 03, 2021. https://forum.zettelkasten.de/discussion/comment/13136/#Comment_13136 (accessed Oct. 06, 2021).
[3]: prometheanhindsight, “Re: how can I write zettel notes in my own words?,” Zettelkasten Forum, Oct. 04, 2021. https://forum.zettelkasten.de/discussion/comment/13140/#Comment_13140 (accessed Oct. 06, 2021).
[4]: GeoEng51, “Re: how can I write zettel notes in my own words?,” Zettelkasten Forum, Oct. 04, 2021. https://forum.zettelkasten.de/discussion/comment/13156/#Comment_13156 (accessed Oct. 06, 2021).
Like the mountains in the fall, your description outlines a supportive environment for capturing ideas. Your eloquence in expounding on the principles is only surpassed by interest in the details. Your #public zettel is a powerful tool. It is bracketed by a statement summarizing the body, "Zettels created from reading notes should be written using your own words, but the phrase isn't as straightforward as it may seem" and the penultimate capped, "Additionally, don't mistake the point of a citation. A citation connects to an idea, not to sentences." As well as citations, this parting advice applies to zettel, which are proxies for ideas. When making links of any type, you are connecting ideas, not notes.
This is a first-class outline of Note Creation 101. I wonder why
#--public
instead of#public
? You have 755 words. I have only 22 zettel this size or larger—less than 1%. There are a least three ideas here that could warrant atomization. Atomization is also a tool for capturing ideas in "your own words." Writing short, encapsulating a more extensive idea in a few sentences helps with the thinking process necessary for ideation.Will Simpson
My zettelkasten is for my ideas, not the ideas of others. I will try to remember this. I must keep doing my best even though I'm a failure. My peak cognition is behind me. One day soon, I will read my last book, write my last note, eat my last meal, and kiss my sweetie for the last time.
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This quote:
is utterly garbage. Sentence by sentence (written as if I am addressing the author):
to the principle of falsifiability
Wrong.
This is non-controversial. But the idea in is not articulated in the first sentence.
Not in the least does this follow from what is written before.
Yes, but where are your arguments, mate?
If you try to re-write this couple sentences in your own words you have to reformulate the ideas the author is trying (and failing) to convey.
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This is excellent. At the moment I don't have a reference—I can find several remarks on this in Letier Reports: a philosophy blog, but falsifiability of hypotheses is not a requirement for scientific validity. There is also the related demarcation problem: there is no clear boundary between science and pseudoscience. (I am not an aficionado of pseudoscience.)
GitHub. Erdős #2. Problems worthy of attack / prove their worth by hitting back. -- Piet Hein. Alter ego (1st-order): Erel Dogg. Alter egos of Erel Dogg (2nd-order): Distracteur des Zettel, HueLED PacArt Lovecraft. I have no direct control over the 2nd-order alter egos. CC BY-SA 4.0.
To be clear... I was referring to @Dilan_Zelsky, advice.
Will Simpson
My zettelkasten is for my ideas, not the ideas of others. I will try to remember this. I must keep doing my best even though I'm a failure. My peak cognition is behind me. One day soon, I will read my last book, write my last note, eat my last meal, and kiss my sweetie for the last time.
kestrelcreek.com
Is it not? I'd be surprised.
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Popper's falsifiability criterion has come under scrutiny by philosophers of science. A quote from the blog post titled Is Economics a "Science"? at Leiter Reports:
GitHub. Erdős #2. Problems worthy of attack / prove their worth by hitting back. -- Piet Hein. Alter ego (1st-order): Erel Dogg. Alter egos of Erel Dogg (2nd-order): Distracteur des Zettel, HueLED PacArt Lovecraft. I have no direct control over the 2nd-order alter egos. CC BY-SA 4.0.
Ah, the underdetermination-thing.
Then I need to un-underdeterminate my position: This was actually my point when I sat in a seminar on the philosophy of science. I didn't call it that underdetermination but this was my point. Theories come back in strange disguises and I was confirmed when Lamarckism had its comeback due to the emergence of epigenetics (yes, some hereditable traits can be aquired or modified by the life you are living. So, be very healthy to pass those awesome and by you controllable epigens to your offspring).
But the scientific method in practice is not scientific. We have to be able to tolerate this underdetermination by allowing to be apply falsification even to the hypothesis that XY is not properly falsified. Ok, my wording is off. I will re-phrase it: Falsification is a local phenomenon, underdetermination is a global one.
Falsification (and verification) are part of the scientific method as single and local steps. But if you progress to the bigger picture other methods are needed.
It is similar to the process of understanding the brain (and a familiar entity the mind): The methods to understand individual connections between neurons are way different from the methods needed to understand the brains architecture. And what is true locally might be false globally. Still, for a complete picture you need to apply both methods.
@Helen_Shepherd
This might be the way you need to go for a bit:
"Idea" is an umbrella term.
A more specific type of idea is "argument".
The argument is complete if you gathered the conclusion and formulated it in your own word, gathered all the necessary (at least available) premises and, lastly, put them into the correct relationship (argument structure).
So, what is the method?
If you can call it a method. I think 95% of the notes (vast majority) I say that were deemed problematic for the reason that is implied above: The note-taker didn't understand the type of the idea.
Some types of ideas:
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@Will
Could you share some of your wisdom in restraining oneself from the details? I'm a detail-psycho.
Didn't see that connection. Thanks for pointing it out!
I reserve
#
without--
for object tags.I use another kind of tags: Organizational tags. I use two:
#--public
and#--proofread
.If I use
#public
and#proofread
instead, there's conflict between the two kinds of tags. That's why I use--
.I also appreciate that you mention the other means to write using one's own words. Writing simple Zettels and following the Principle of Atomicity are key here too.
@Sascha
Enlightening. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Wow! @Helen_Shepherd, your question brought out the forum's heavy hitters with some great responses. I have two base questions I like to ask depending on the type of quote I captured. First, What are the main ideas? I list these ideas, which are essentially titles to Zettel notes. If I have an existing note, I determine if what I read changes what I have already written. My Zettel notes are nonlinear and flow from note to note, so if the current message is new, I'll review the thought string to determine the best place to insert it into the thread. Second, if all else fails, I ask, Why did I capture this quote? The summary following this question often turns into a surprising overview of the message itself and in my own words.
@Dilan_Zelsky Oh I see, the double-dash is nice! In my stupid programmer mind I was considering tags that looked like computer-focused metadata, like
#state:ideation
or#state:editing
, but the prefix is nice and looks wonky enough to stand out as something special.Author at Zettelkasten.de • https://christiantietze.de/
@ctietze Yes, it's nice and I'm happy with it! I took some bad hits when using double dashes. So, using something to separate both types of tags really came in handy.
I actually took some inspiration on your arguments about conventions with referencing glyphs in "You only find what you have identified”. I owe the inspiration to you.
I struggle with this issue in my work (in academic research) every day. One method that I ultimately turn to is using diagrams. Diagrams help me understand the internal logic of what the original writer is saying and gives me room to add my own logical take. I refer to this diagram to explain the concept. I use this method for particularly difficult concepts. This method was taught to me in a lecture in interpreting between Japanese and English. The interpreter does not actually write out a complete diagram, there is not enough time. But idea is that the interpreter explains the meaning and story of what the speaker is talking about which makes the interpretation much easier to understand.
@GeoEng51 Thank you for sharing your approach. My Zettling powers have increased a lot thanks to applying it.
However, I'm struggling to put into practice the part of letting ideas stew. In particular, I can't come up with a reliable way to think about the ideas.
Perhaps elaborating on how you do it may help me. E.g.: When you do it, for how long, if it's out loud or in your head, etc. So, would you mind to elaborate?
Haha! Your post reminded me of the question: "Do you mean X or Y or Z", to which the answer "Yes" was given. Or in this case, "all of the above".
On a more serious note, I did add a P.S. to my post on October 4 which mentioned that part of "stewing" involved thinking while walking (mostly without verbalizing) and thinking while talking to family and friends (often also while walking - our family loves to walk). These activities help us to consciously work through and clarify our thoughts.
In regard to the rest of the "stewing" process, I am convinced that our subconscious mind has great power to chew over ideas and pop up solutions (and occasionally questions). I'm not sure if this is a real psychological phenomenon (maybe @MartinBB could comment) or just pop psychology, but it seems to work for me.
In that context, "stewing" involves alternating periods of conscious thinking about an idea/zettel with periods of thinking about something else or resting the mind (which might include napping or sleeping). My subconscious will not work to a schedule, so I have to be patient. To encourage the stewing process, I will review the idea and the fledgling zettel once a day (or so; maybe at longer periods). Sooner or later, either something will pop into my mind which helps to clarify how to write the zettel (in which case, I immediately jot down the idea or approach in NotePlan on my iPhone, for later transfer to my ZK in The Archive) or my mind will just be ready to proceed (i.e., when reviewing the zettel).
This is one reason I use the tag "#unfinished" on all my zettels, as it can take days or even weeks to achieve clarity, and I use that tag to remind myself of assignments that I passed to my subconscious for help. The key is to be patient as your subconscious cannot be forced; in fact, it seems to work best if you don't try to force it.
That tag ("#unfinished") is part of my template zettel. It gets automatically added to every new zettel and is only removed when I consider the zettel sufficiently mature that I don't want to regularly review it any more. However, that doesn't stop me from reading and revising old zettels
@GeoEng51 Willingly!
The operations of the mind below the level of consciousness are certainly not pop psychology. If all mental operations had to be conscious, 1) we would not be able to achieve very much, 2) we would be permanently exhausted from all the conscious effort -- thinking uses up huge amounts of energy, as one might deduce from the fact that the largest blood vessels in the body go through the neck to the brain. Even "at rest" the brain is doing a huge amount of work and consuming a lot of "fuel".
Freud's conceptualisation of the psyche is sometimes represented in the form of an iceberg, the conscious part being the tip, and the vast majority below the surface and not normally accessible to conscious processes. This is explained here: Freud and the Unconscious Mind. Over the years, I have come to have a healthy respect for the power of the unconscious mind. I am constantly seeing people who think they are doing things for one reason, when it is clear to me (and to others) that they are actually doing it for a reason lurking well below the level of consciousness. I was recently reading a book that I found irritating for reasons I could not explain, and it took me a while to work out that it reminded me of my father, who was a rather difficult personality. It wasn't actually the book itself that was irritating.
Then there is the subject of automaticity. This has been studied extensively by John Bargh, who put the fruit of many years of research into a book entitled Before You Know It: The Unconscious Reasons We do What We Do. I won't try to summarise 350 pages here, but suffice to say that a lot of things that happen in the mind cannot be conscious because they happen too fast. Consciousness is very nice, but it is too slow for a lot of the things we have to do. Hence we have a more rapid mechanism that does a lot of the work. Some have even argued that it is really the non-conscious brain that is in charge: Chasing the Rainbow:The Non-conscious Nature of Being. Bargh has also argued that we do not really have free will: Yale psychologist John Bargh: ‘Politicians want us to be fearful. They’re manipulating us for their own interest'. He is not alone in taking this position.
When it comes to the question of the benefits of letting ideas "stew" there is plenty to support this. For example, there is this article about Poincaré. Then there is this: Why procrastination can help fuel creativity. So, not thinking is very useful. I do it all the time
@MartinBB thanks for that response! So much to look into and chew/stew on.
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Haha! Good one. And thanks for the very informative response!!
@Dilan_Zelsky The article by Poincaré to which @MartinBB refers has an excellent description of the workings of the subconscious mind, with some interesting observations and pre-conditions. I highly recommend it.
@GeoEng51 @MartinBB
Really appreciate your comments! I can anticipate my power greatly raising once I've processed your comments.
I'd like to add my grain of sand to the sand castle. Barbara Oakley talks about something related to this in A Mind For Numbers. I think it involved switching between two modes of thinking to aid the thinking process.
I read the book prior to having a Zettelkasten, so I don't remember much. However, I think it may be useful to you or others. I'll definitely read it when I can.
@Dilan_Zelsky
Maybe something like "Thinking, Fast and Slow" by Daniel Kahneman?
@GeoEng51 Not sure what you're referring to, but I have that book on the shelf waiting to be read. I'll read it too, eventually.
Glad to hear that you have a way to deal with this.
Unfortunately, diagrams don't work for me. I may be doing them wrong or I just work differently. Who knows.
By the way, please make sure to address someone. E.g.: @Dilan_Zelsky. I'm not sure who you were addressing with your post, but if it was me, my radar didn't catch your comment.
I love how you dissected the argument and analyzed it. It was like watching Black Jack conduct surgery. A terrific mastery of the scalpel!
One question: If one were to reformulate the argument, does the author merit any credit? The argument wouldn't be the same, so I guess that citing them wouldn't make sense.
It'd be like making connections to a Zettel, then changing the idea of the Zettel. You break the context of the links to the Zettel because the idea is different.
Still, would love to hear your take.
Yes, at least as the inspiration. If you improve on the argument it is still an important source. If it was just the kickstart to do your own thing then at least mention the author.
It gives you trails that you can follow later. Last week, I was able to reconstruct most of the development of an idea that I had in 2017 which had its first seed in 2013. In this case, it is just for the lols and education (I did it for the upcoming video on models). But sometimes, it is useful for yourself.
Also: Give credit freely. It grounds you by making yourself the dwarf on giant's shoulders which is a humble place. It makes you more virtuous (at least a tiny bit).
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@Sascha
Sorry for not replying. You didn't mention me using the
@
, so I didn't get notified.Thank you for the response. This is useful to expand on what I've learned from my post on dealing with weak arguments. Really appreciate it!