Dissertation Sharing: Actor-Network Theory, PKM and Atomic Notes
Hi all, first time posting on this forum despite being a frequent reader.
I thought I'd share a rather imperfect piece of academic writing that has been coming together over a number of months. It's published via Obsidian's native publishing feature, and so in the other folders a few notes can be found which demonstrate my current approach to research (which informed the writing of the main piece).
The first two sections are probably of little interest, but I thought that the last--§3--might appeal to those who are interested in what effects the proliferation of Zettelkasten and related methods might be having on knowledge work, writing, and technology, and also what it in general its adoption might reflect.
Anyway, I'm always interested in discussing ideas related to this sort of thing. Happy to answer any questions if the reading proves laborious.
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Thanks for sharing this, and welcome to the forum!
Let me be totally honest with you. My initial response to your writing is very critical. There is a lot of theoretical exposition without, as far as I can see in a cursory reading, much serious consideration of counterarguments, as if "instrumental conceptions" of technology and Bruno Latour's actor network theory (ANT) are the only two alternatives, with "instrumental conceptions" serving almost as a straw man. And once the straw man is knocked down, ANT dominates the essay without any acknowledgment (unless I missed it) of its limitations, especially how ANT overlooks the importance of human psychology.
This sentence epitomizes the problem:
Here platforms strangely seem to have more agency than people, as if people are being shaped by them without even knowing that it is happening. This may be true for some people, but not everyone is so ignorant, and some of us have developed sophisticated models of what is happening, so we need a more in-depth consideration of human differential psychology within the context of embodied cognitive science. You might object that this is not the subject of your essay, but acknowledging these areas of study and the challenge they pose to your application of ANT is part of the consideration of counterarguments.
If you're not familiar with Ronald Giere, I'd suggest reading his criticism of Latour and similar theorists. I think Giere is basically right against you and Latour, so my dissatisfaction with your thesis is unsurprising. For example, here's Giere in "The problem of agency in scientific distributed cognitive systems", Journal of Cognition and Culture (4)3-4, 2004, 759–774:
At the start of that paper, Giere said:
Following Giere's line of thought here, and to repeat what I already said, I don't think you have an adequate theoretical understanding of PKM in your thesis because you don't pay enough attention to the human aspect of distributed cognitive systems, and specifically how people differentially model their cognitive systems.
Some other publications by Giere that may be helpful:
I expect that studying more psychology of science and technology would be helpful too, for example: Jason R. Finley, Farah Naaz, & Francine W. Goh (2018). Memory and Technology: How We Use Information in the Brain and the World. Cham: Springer. https://doi.org/10.1007/978-3-319-99169-6
At the start of section 3.3 on "atomic notes", this thesis also repeats the misconception that Luhmann invented the practice of "writing discrete, interlinked notes". People have often said on the Internet that Luhmann invented this practice, but there is no need to repeat this misconception as uncontested fact. In fact, among English speakers, people were already using and theorizing about highly granular (atomic) knowledge elements several decades before Luhmann's slip-box became widely known. This section's history and conceptualization of "atomic notes" is just one among many possible such histories and conceptualizations, but it doesn't acknowledge that there could be alternatives.
In my previous comment, I pleaded for more attention to how people differentially model their cognitive systems. I would add that this entire thesis is an example of its author modeling cognitive systems, but nothing is revealed about the author. Perhaps this is partly due to the choice to write in an "impersonal" academic style, and/or perhaps it is due to the theoretical deprecation of human agency that I mentioned in my previous comment? Does the author's theory apply to the author as well, and how (examples?), or is the theory only about other people's knowledge? Whatever the reasons for this lack of attention to the author, I don't consider it a virtue. In the book Qualitative Literacy (Small & Calarco, 2022), one of the criteria for high-quality qualitative research is self-awareness, the extent to which the researcher understands and communicates the impact of who they are, and their life path, on their research. Why did the author choose to apply ANT to PKM instead of (in my opinion) a better theory? Small & Calarco's criterion is specifically for ethnographic research, but I think it also applies to theory when a theory is about people who are doing more or less what the theorist is doing, as in a theory of PKM.
Although I have been very critical of the thesis shared above in its present state, this morning I was thinking that it does point to a way to improve a template by Giere that I have mentioned previously in the forum, such as in a discussion on "how to improve thinking skills". There I quoted Giere, who wrote:
Giere replaced the variables in that sentence with letters to give the form:
This formula can be considered an instance of what the thesis calls an "instrumental conception" of science and technology, because it abstracts away the effects (E) of technical artifacts and other things (T) on the people, models, representational processes, purposes, and perhaps even the aspects of the world being represented, depending on on what those aspects are. (Although it should be noted that Giere's conception of X already includes T.)
So, despite my criticism of the thesis, it has been helpful in pointing out to me that this particular formula of Giere can be expanded to include other causal factors, perhaps like this:
Where I still think that ANT is insufficient as a theory of PKM is where it assumes that we can ignore the first half of that sentence, the so-called "instrumental" half concerned with cognitive agents and their representational processes. That is still the most important part for a theory of knowledge, especially an epistemological theory of knowledge about knowledge or meta-modeling, although it's true that the effects of technical artifacts and other things shouldn't be ignored, and indeed are often impossible to ignore, as most of us have probably experienced when struggling with our technical artifacts.